Thread:Hakimiru/@comment-24366645-20140428023010/@comment-24366645-20140509000008

I’m glad my suggestions fit well!

Uwain: "あーそろそろ眠ってもいいかな？　え、ダメ？" = Ah... Is it alright to rest soon? Eh, no? I think "yet" might be a better fit for そろそろ instead of "soon", but otherwise, looks great.

Yes, it's just a casual version of 仕方が無い. Sort of like speaking with a drawl, of sorts. I think maybe just try to make it sound casual? Something like "No helping it, I guess"?

Sort of loose, but for the rest:

でもさ、だったらそっちこそ、さっさと目を覚ましてくれないかな. But in that case, isn't it about time for *you* to wake up?

いったいいつまで、目を開けた夢を見てるつもりなのさ. Just how long do you intend to dream with your eyes open?

ほら、さっさと起きろ、お眠の眠れぬ獅子様もお怒りだぜ？ Come on, get up. Even the napping unsleeping lion gets angry too, you know. (Uwain is known as the Unsleeping Lion, so he's saying that even he'll get angry if he doesn't wake up.)

Thank you! I completely forgot Uwain was the Unsleeping Lion, it’s mentioned in Amerikana’s story and everything, but it must have slipped my mind ((-_-))

I gave Lancelot a shot, I really did, my laziness took over at some point...

たまにはと思って本気出してやったのに、もー最悪だわ. = (He wanted to have a serious battle, but it had a bad outcome?)

約束通り、アンタに殺されてやるよ. = As promised, I'll let you kill me.

でもさ、なんだよその顔. = But, what's with the weird face?

なんで泣いてんのよ. = Why are you crying for?

悲劇の王でも演じてるつもりかよ. = Are you playing the role/part of the tragic king?

男の涙なんかに、興味はないんでね. = (He has no interest in the tears of a man, or something like that?)

やっぱアンタのこと、大嫌いだわ. = After all, I hate you.

Are any mistranslated or did I miss the mark? Thank you again for your help (/｡＼)