Thread:Hypernao/@comment-26036455-20150821172555/@comment-26331509-20150822015009

Hello ^^ I'm a little confused about the sentence as well but that's how I interpreted it (but yes! I meant she convinced Crowley to wear matching clothes so she wouldn't have to buy her own clothes). The original tweet goes like this:

クロウリー メモ その②

・アマイモンのしっぽをもふもふしたい教祖様

・お手をさせようとして喧嘩になる教祖様 ・アマイモンに骨を出してマジギレされる教祖様

・教祖様にペアルックしようとけしかけ、自分の服も買わせるオリエンス

->this would probably be: "Let's have a pair look" Oriens spurred Crowley, so that she could buy her clothes as well?

・だが、パイモンにばれて半殺しにあうオリエンス

I'm hoping the others are translated right as well @@"

No problems, I'm glad the characters are becoming more likeable ^^ and yes, Yasutsuna is so cute >////< He's one of the units I like most in the game xD His story in Wind Boys killed me (I would hate Windy if he kills Yasutsuna :/)

Thanks so much for proofreading! (oh my english... ==") I'll find someway to post the link to the orginal japanese text along with my translation so that you can check it out too. ^^

If you want to proofread the stories as well, there's tons of question I want to ask xD (one thing really bugging me since yesterday is the translation of 完全世界. At first I thought of translating it as "Perfect World" but after seeing that Crowley's NS is called "Complete World" which means the same thing, I'm thinking that the translation might be "Complete World" afterall. But if it's translated as the Complete World it might sound weird in some places i.e all the Psychics' NS would become Complete ____ instead of Perfect ______ and like Tilson's speech from Burial Hall 「完全なる飲み物だ」 can't became "It's a complete drink" but it's fine being "It's a perfect drink".

Thank you~ :D