Thread:Hakimiru/@comment-24761196-20140402224056/@comment-24380832-20140411204749

How does your Arisa team look? She has a higher multiplier than Amane, and both she and Arthur get the full benefits of each other's leader skills.

I think your rewriting ability was fine, it was just that the source material you were using as your base wasn't very good. Do you think you might be able to fix my sample above up and make it post-worthy? I'm not sure how they work nowadays, but in the past most manga-scanlation groups would have a translator (who didn't necessarily need to be great at English), and an editor, who would be the one to massage whatever the translator spat out into better, release-quality English. This was a great arrangement for me, because writing and rephrasing was what usually took me the most time (like hours, compared to the minutes spent understanding the source). If I don't have to worry about that, I can then shift my focus to speed and accuracy. Do you think this is something you might be interested in trying?